Consider employing a deciever in your plot

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Consider employing a deciever in your plot

Sometimes the plot of your story requires that the viewpoint character keep his identity secret from other characters. Such a character is known as a deciever.

A good example of a deceiver occurs in “The Ten Commandments” motion picture when Moses, a popular and sucessful Egpytian general, learns he is of Hebrew descent and so goes into the slaves’ brickmaking camp to learn what life is like for his people. If he went in as a general, he would only see what the slavemasters wanted him to see and would not truly feel or understand the Hebrews’ plight. So he hides his identity and “pretends” to be a Hebrew.

There are a numebr of plot situations when a deceiver could be used:
g Traveling incognito – The character may want to learn the truth about what is going on. This works for anyone investigating a crime or spying in which sneaking around is necessary.
g Operating in disguise – If the character must accomplish some mission, he might wear costumes or change his identity. This allows the character to operate in the open rather than skulk about.
g Keeping identity secret as he’s really a superhero – A character may operate in the open but does not want anyone to connect him to his alter ego (such as Clark Kent doesn’t want anyone to know he’s Superman) because doing so would put him at risk and limit opportunities for the alter ego to solve problems.

A subtype of the deceiver character is the man on the make, a character whose deceptions form a coherent game plan that become apparent as the plot develops.

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