Ten Rules in Ten Days - Rule 6: Never use the words "suddenly" or "all hell broke loose."

This rule doesn't require an explanation. I have noticed that writers who use "suddenly" tend to exercise less control in the application of exclamation points.

First, I'll address "all hell broke loose." This is forbidden for a different reason than "suddenly." It's a cliche'. Martin Amis said that writing is a war on cliche'. It's heard writing. It's been said. The only time a cliche' is allowed is in dialogue, and even then it should be restricted. Maybe a character has a verbal tic where t...