strideup asked:
I have this story I have enjoyed writing. I...






strideup asked:


I have this story I have enjoyed writing. I have taken the readers on an emotional roller-coaster already. I’ve given hope, and then dashed it against the rocks (all this delicious stuff). But my ending is shaping up to be too easy. Things fell into place, and suddenly my antagonist is outnumbered and could plausibly be defeated without any major character deaths or tension.


I would give him an extra level or something, but I’ve already strung my would-be readers along quite a b...

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Published on August 09, 2014 15:45
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