Virtual Tee

We’re down to the last 24 hours of Toolbox, and Nancy’s been busy on her collection of Great Moments of Critique. Which I am now going to steal.
Some of these, maybe, depend heavily on context.
“You need to get more involved with the characters who are dead.”

“I didn’t know we were in Hell–I thought it was a recycling plant in Denver.”

“I loved the extra ears.”

“There is too much slurping.”

“Where are the bikers and crackheads?”
“I don’t want to read too much about aliens munching fingers.”
“I have p...