Things learned from tonight's revision

1) If a word or phrase isn't in [square brackets:], I should trust that means I've already looked up whether it's in period or not.

2) Scenes are so much more exciting when your protagonist doesn't play nice.

3) kniedzw gets a funny look on his face when I appear in the doorway of his office and say, "Can I get your help for a second? It's spousal abuse for fun and profit."

4) But he is then very good about dragging me across the living room floor so I can figure out where a flying elbow would c...