When the Writers' Group says "uhm," it's Time for a Do-Over.

Last night at Wyrdsmiths, the reception of my newest re-vision of the prequel was met with a resounding, "Uhm." My favorite part was when Eleanor declined to critique it until she'd heard whether or not everyone else was going to completely trash it. After Bill made happy noises that I was at least making progress, Eleanor decided "well, if Bill likes it, it's probably okay."

Wow.

So this morning I am starting again.

I have no fraking idea why I am struggling so much to write this book. I deci