Editorial comments from Chasing Nonconformity (Part 2)
I am happy to announce that my editor (i.e. my mother) has returned the latest draft of Chasing Nonconformity back to me, full of comments and ready for revisions! Upon going through said comments, I found some of them quite amusing, and thought I might share them with you here today. This is part 2 of the images, so be sure to check out part 1 to see the first half of her excellent and insightful commentary. Also make sure to check out the caption on each photo for context.
Without further ado …
[SPOILER ALERT] The following images contain snippets of text from the Chasing Nonconformity manuscript. Don’t scroll down if you don’t like spoilers!
Random scribbles at the bottom of the page. No idea what they mean. Very mysterious.
Mother misinterprets the verb “snap”.
Mother gets sassy.
Mother questions my protagonist’s hygiene.
… I have no idea.
Mother makes fun of my inability to keep people’s heights consistent.
More mysterious, scribbled-out numbers.
Inscription on the last page of the manuscript. Approved!
