Anyone fancy a taste?
Thanks to everyone who supported my giveaway of *Hide & Seek* last week - I had a fabulous response!
This week (as promised) I bring you a brand new snippet from the depths of the Brandon writing desk...
This one is from my forthcoming debut (full length) novel... It is coming along very nicely and the end of my first draft is in sight. As ever, I'd like to reiterate that this is not a finished extract and is subject to editorial change, but it does give you a flavour of what's to come! ;O)
Your comments and suggestions are ALWAYS welcome! :-)
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“Yes…”
He moans as he pushes in and out of my unbelievable wetness. “Yes, little one. Feel me inside you; feel how wet you are for me; feel how much you want me here.”
“Oh. Sir...”
I can barely make coherent words as I grind myself back onto his pulsating length. He’s right. I do want him. I want him more than I have ever wanted any man before. He fucks me between our combined grunts and as he had promised, he does so with vigour. Each thrust pushes me deeper into the bed and I love the authority with his he takes me. My eyes dart from his muscular chest, covered with just the perfect amount of soft, dark hair, to his strong jawline. I see the strain there as he pulls out and then slams back inside me. Reflexively I squeeze my eyes shut as he fully penetrates me and then they fly open again to watch the pleasure as it consumes him.
His face perfectly portrays his inner battle; wanting to nurture and continue the gratification he feels inside of me and yet wanting so desperately for his own release. All of a sudden I feel like the most powerful creature to ever walk the earth. I am the one tied to be bed and I am the one who has crawled willingly across this room to serve him and yet to see him now; I know it. I know I am the powerful one. Whatever he says I know he needs me just as much as I need him. I can feel the tension in his arms and torso as his orgasm approaches. I pant underneath him; enjoying the intimacy between us and the warmth of his body.
“Oh fuck, Jeanie,” he growls as he empties himself inside of me.
I can’t help but gasp again at the new level of intensity that I feel at this moment. We lie there together. This time it’s his hot body which is panting over me. I feel his cock quivering inside my wetness and I squeeze him gently. He raises his head slowly and regards me with a warm smile.
“Good morning, gorgeous,” he says and plants a slow, sensual kiss on my open mouth.
© Felicity Brandon, 2014
Happy hump day, everyone! ;-)
Fx
This week (as promised) I bring you a brand new snippet from the depths of the Brandon writing desk...
This one is from my forthcoming debut (full length) novel... It is coming along very nicely and the end of my first draft is in sight. As ever, I'd like to reiterate that this is not a finished extract and is subject to editorial change, but it does give you a flavour of what's to come! ;O)
Your comments and suggestions are ALWAYS welcome! :-)
.........................................
“Yes…”
He moans as he pushes in and out of my unbelievable wetness. “Yes, little one. Feel me inside you; feel how wet you are for me; feel how much you want me here.”
“Oh. Sir...”
I can barely make coherent words as I grind myself back onto his pulsating length. He’s right. I do want him. I want him more than I have ever wanted any man before. He fucks me between our combined grunts and as he had promised, he does so with vigour. Each thrust pushes me deeper into the bed and I love the authority with his he takes me. My eyes dart from his muscular chest, covered with just the perfect amount of soft, dark hair, to his strong jawline. I see the strain there as he pulls out and then slams back inside me. Reflexively I squeeze my eyes shut as he fully penetrates me and then they fly open again to watch the pleasure as it consumes him.
His face perfectly portrays his inner battle; wanting to nurture and continue the gratification he feels inside of me and yet wanting so desperately for his own release. All of a sudden I feel like the most powerful creature to ever walk the earth. I am the one tied to be bed and I am the one who has crawled willingly across this room to serve him and yet to see him now; I know it. I know I am the powerful one. Whatever he says I know he needs me just as much as I need him. I can feel the tension in his arms and torso as his orgasm approaches. I pant underneath him; enjoying the intimacy between us and the warmth of his body.
“Oh fuck, Jeanie,” he growls as he empties himself inside of me.
I can’t help but gasp again at the new level of intensity that I feel at this moment. We lie there together. This time it’s his hot body which is panting over me. I feel his cock quivering inside my wetness and I squeeze him gently. He raises his head slowly and regards me with a warm smile.
“Good morning, gorgeous,” he says and plants a slow, sensual kiss on my open mouth.
© Felicity Brandon, 2014
Happy hump day, everyone! ;-)
Fx
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Jul 02, 2014 10:38AM
This is a winner, as I'm dying to know what took place before and after this scene. I love the emotion you draw from readers and your characters. The depth of your flow tells me how well you know the characters you are writing about. Loved it! Keep them coming. And do let us know the release date!
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Thank you Shelley! Your feedback is so important to me. I will absolutely let you all know once I have more concrete plans regarding the release... :-)
The fact this will be a full-length read ups my anticipation. LOL.
