I just have to share this review/feedback!
Responding to my request for feedback, one of my fans sent me this a few weeks ago. I really enjoyed it and was happy to receive such thorough feedback for BRIGHT, and this gave me the confidence to go ahead and publish the hardcover edition of Bright on Lulu.com today. Bright is probably still not 100% perfect or finalized in the editing, but this review really gave me the forward momentum I needed :D I am honoring this fan's request to remain anonymous, and pasting the review exactly as they wrote it. Enjoy!
"Hello
first of all , I apologize for my bad English in advance .
for your request about the feedback for your novel "Bright"
I'm sending this to you in private, because i never interacted in this site beyond rating books and and adding them to the lists . xD so i'm sorry again if this is not how you want the feedback.
i'm a fan of your style of writing, you absolutely know how to push the right buttons. and for "Bright" there's nothing need to change in it , in my opinion. i'm just going to tell you how i felt
back to the request
Monty's fear of commitment and his inner struggle lead to his cheating, which i understood a little but it's still a bad thing to do.
now for walter , the poor thing made me sometimes want to hug and shelter him, and sometimes i wanted to shake him so hard and give him a waking slap or two to make him come to his senses. his selfless nature made him a lamb among a pack of wolves,and how sometimes i felt that monty took advantage of him.
at the last part of the book i was happy and frustrated at the same " i don't know how is that too , HAHAHA!!!" i just wished that walter would have made it harder a little bit more for monty to take him back, and not , for monty, to take natalie's confession to make it like a switch and vows to never cheats again " oh is this how he feels every time i hook up with someone else, but no this is serious , she love him and, and i was thisclose to lose him , so i'll never hurt him again" that was how i pictured monty's monologue,btw. but again walter's is so much in love with him that he became more ill to the brink of death. so it i guess it worked for them in the end.
i know i made you confused more than ever with my -out of order- thoughts and rambling .xD. but i loved this book to the point of breaking cover and commenting.
i can't wait for your next work!!, a new auto read author for me, yaaay!!!>
have a nice day/night dear author, and excuse my silliness."
Check out the page for the new hardcover for Bright here:
http://www.lulu.com/shop/laura-susan-...
"Hello
first of all , I apologize for my bad English in advance .
for your request about the feedback for your novel "Bright"
I'm sending this to you in private, because i never interacted in this site beyond rating books and and adding them to the lists . xD so i'm sorry again if this is not how you want the feedback.
i'm a fan of your style of writing, you absolutely know how to push the right buttons. and for "Bright" there's nothing need to change in it , in my opinion. i'm just going to tell you how i felt
back to the request
Monty's fear of commitment and his inner struggle lead to his cheating, which i understood a little but it's still a bad thing to do.
now for walter , the poor thing made me sometimes want to hug and shelter him, and sometimes i wanted to shake him so hard and give him a waking slap or two to make him come to his senses. his selfless nature made him a lamb among a pack of wolves,and how sometimes i felt that monty took advantage of him.
at the last part of the book i was happy and frustrated at the same " i don't know how is that too , HAHAHA!!!" i just wished that walter would have made it harder a little bit more for monty to take him back, and not , for monty, to take natalie's confession to make it like a switch and vows to never cheats again " oh is this how he feels every time i hook up with someone else, but no this is serious , she love him and, and i was thisclose to lose him , so i'll never hurt him again" that was how i pictured monty's monologue,btw. but again walter's is so much in love with him that he became more ill to the brink of death. so it i guess it worked for them in the end.
i know i made you confused more than ever with my -out of order- thoughts and rambling .xD. but i loved this book to the point of breaking cover and commenting.
i can't wait for your next work!!, a new auto read author for me, yaaay!!!>
have a nice day/night dear author, and excuse my silliness."
Check out the page for the new hardcover for Bright here:
http://www.lulu.com/shop/laura-susan-...
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