Dialogue lover

I love writing dialogue.

Here's a snippet of Kristi and Jared having a chat:

"Done with the caveman routine?"
The organ he refused to acknowledge lurched as he glanced up, saw Kristi on her side, propped on an elbow, wearing that sinful green bikini and a reluctant smile.
She'd been frosty towards him over dinner, with more of the same since they'd arrived on the island, but under his constant barrage of teasing she was finally starting to thaw.
Not that he blamed her. From her angry outburst...