I don't have Attention Deficit Dis...oh! Look! A bunny!

So, it turns out I'm quite easily distracted. If I'm not juggling at least 6 projects at once, I get bored. I like to jump from WIP to WIP to WIP until I get...wait for it...WIPLASH!

That joke was terrible. I apologise unreservedly.

*bows head and performs ritual of abject contrition*

Anyway, at the moment I'm working away on the sequel to Dark Space, as well as my Samoan-Australian policeman story and, with J.A. Rock, a sequel to Mark Cooper versus America, and a bunch of other things from The List. And this was quite enough to keep me busy.

Which is why I will never know why I decided to look through my filing cabinet.

My filing cabinet is a mess. The rail things that the files hang off have been busted for years, so stuff is just shoved in there. Most of it is so old it's typewritten. Or, worse, written in the back of school exercise books. My filing cabinet is basically a cross between a repository for every piece of fiction I've ever written (apart from the stuff that was justifiably destroyed), a nursery for young spiders, a gecko hatchery, and a dust bunny sanctuary.

Anyway, I opened it.

And I found the uncompleted fantasy epic that I began writing in high school. It was surprisingly obsessed with crows. 

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Also, it's everything you'd expect: cliche piled upon cliche, terrible world building, a meandering plot, and full of so many Mary Sue characters that I want to build a time machine, go back to when I was fifteen, and punch myself in the head.

Also, on the first page, instead of could have had, I wrote  could of had.

As in, of all the things I could have had, I wish it had been basic grammatical knowledge.
So, it's terrible.

But it's not too terrible. Underneath all that terribleness, there's the germ of an interesting idea. And I'm quite excited, because I think I can do something with it. I need to make some extensive changes, but I can do that.

I'll start with the prince's love interest. 

He's totally a boy now. :) 

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message 1: by Duck (new)

Duck Speaking of Dark Space, can you tell us who the cover model is? He's gorgeous.


message 2: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Duck wrote: "Speaking of Dark Space, can you tell us who the cover model is? He's gorgeous."

Usually, I wouldn't have a clue, but I actually know the answer to this! His name is Peter Stoychev.

You will now lose hours on Google :)


♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣ You're a great public servant, Lisa, providing very important info. :D

Have fun with all the writerly schtuff, looking forward to all of it. The Samoan/Aussie copper story def has me intrigued.


message 4: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Irish Smurfette wrote: "You're a great public servant, Lisa, providing very important info. :D

Have fun with all the writerly schtuff, looking forward to all of it. The Samoan/Aussie copper story def has me intrigued."


Thanks! It's fun to write. But I'm ignoring it for now while I work on the Dark Space sequel.

*looks down at what she's written tonight and pretends it's from the Dark Space sequel, and not the reworked high school fantasy epic *


message 5: by Julio (new)

Julio Genao *dies laughing*

I love you, Lisa Henry.

*remembers dead people cannot read dark space sequels*

oh, fuck.

*comes back to life*


message 6: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry A MIRACLE!


♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣ We haven't had one of those in awhile! Glad it was you that provided one, J lol :p


message 8: by Smith (new)

Smith Barney fellow ADD'er here that {eagerly} declares a love of crows and a Dark Space sequel.


message 9: by Lisa (last edited May 17, 2014 06:11AM) (new)

Lisa Henry Smith wrote: " fellow ADD'er here that {eagerly} declares a love of crows and a Dark Space sequel."

Thanks, Smith!

For all the crow fans out there:

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message 10: by Jyanx (new)

Jyanx julio wrote: "*dies laughing*

I love you, Lisa Henry.

*remembers dead people cannot read dark space sequels*

oh, fuck.

*comes back to life*"


I died at the same part too.


message 11: by Smith (new)

Smith Barney Lisa wrote: "Smith wrote: " fellow ADD'er here that {eagerly} declares a love of crows and a Dark Space sequel."

Thanks, Smith!

For all the crow fans out there:

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ahahaha..


message 12: by Adam (new)

Adam Sequels for Dark Space and Mark Cooper versus America?! Excuse me while I go hyperventilate in the corner.


message 13: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Somebody get Adam a paper bag! And make sure there's a bottle of cheap booze in it!


message 14: by Elizabetta (new)

Elizabetta Yes, yes, yes! to all of it. Just sooner. gah, so happy to dream about Samoan/Aussie cop. can't wait!


message 15: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Elizabetta wrote: "Yes, yes, yes! to all of it. Just sooner. gah, so happy to dream about Samoan/Aussie cop. can't wait!"

*gets busy writing*


Awilk -never sleeps- Very excited about everything you are working on, but you can't answer this post as you are busy writing them for me to read.


message 17: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Awilk -never sleeps- wrote: "Very excited about everything you are working on, but you can't answer this post as you are busy writing them for me to read."

*shifty eyes*
Yes...too busy writing...


message 18: by Onyx (new)

Onyx Wow Lisa, you are TOO funny!!

very much looking forward to the Dark Space sequel, and more details about this crow novel from your early days.

bahahaha 'attempted murder' :D


message 19: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Onyx wrote: "Wow Lisa, you are TOO funny!!

very much looking forward to the Dark Space sequel, and more details about this crow novel from your early days.

bahahaha 'attempted murder' :D"


Thanks, Onyx! :)


message 20: by Angel (new)

Angel Lisa, I am so crazy stoked about the Dark Space sequel( jumping up and down)! OMG I can't wait! Keep writing and read this later! :)


message 21: by Vivian (new)

Vivian You can have my crows. They start cawing at 5:30 in the morning; I'm trying to figure out if it is illegal to kill them and if shooting is off the table inside city limits.

Btw. Be kind to little, way-back-you because you got here from there, so you couldn't have been too bad.


message 22: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Angel wrote: "Lisa, I am so crazy stoked about the Dark Space sequel( jumping up and down)! OMG I can't wait! Keep writing and read this later! :)"

Lol! Thanks Angel!


message 23: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Vivian wrote: "You can have my crows. They start cawing at 5:30 in the morning; I'm trying to figure out if it is illegal to kill them and if shooting is off the table inside city limits.

Btw. Be kind to little..."


Aw! I kind of love crows still. A bit. Maybe not at 5.30 in the morning though.


message 24: by Angel (new)

Angel Lisa,what are you doing here? Aren't you supposed to be writing?HaHa!


message 25: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Angel wrote: "Lisa,what are you doing here? Aren't you supposed to be writing?HaHa!"

I've decided I need 2 computers. One for just writing, and one for the internet. And the one with the internet needs to be broken.


message 26: by Angel (new)

Angel I hear you,I have been on it all day and haven't moved from my couch! I have to go into work soon so it will get me off my butt! Damn you internet!


message 27: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Henry Angel wrote: "I hear you,I have been on it all day and haven't moved from my couch! I have to go into work soon so it will get me off my butt! Damn you internet!"

Lol! I just got home from work. What's the first thing I do? Turn on the computer. Crazy.

Have a good day at work!


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