[Anne] DOOM!

Tami Note: Anne sent this in, as an example of writing from one of her kidlets, from around the 3rd or 4th grade level. She asked if I’d like to have more. My initial inclination was to shout HECK YES, but I thought I’d let you readers toss in a vote as well. If you’d like more like this, please comment and say so!


CHAPTER 1


Ugly, terrifying, evil. That’s the way most people would describe it. But me, the way I would explain it would be fun, exciting, awesome and I guess kind of dangerous. So I guess what you were about to ask was what is it? What is this thing that I’m talking about? I am talking about the HOLE OF DOOM! That’s what I’m talking about. All of the kids at school make such a big deal over it, and don’t even come close to a mile away from it. But me, I have taken my scooter, bike , skateboard and electric scooter there and jumped the HOLE OF DOOM with all of them, and people at school keep calling me this big show off. Just the way I like it.



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