Edits--Round One

Got first round of edits back from my editor. Yay! Found out what my go-to words are..."that" and "little". It's funny, but even with it marked up in red and purple glory, I can see how much better its grown already. I think the next time I go through an MS on an edit, I'm deleting every "that" and I'll read it through to see if I really need it. Save my editor some ink. :)

"Light..." had a good day yesterday. It took a song with a good beat...