Haiku Poetry and How to Write it! (part 2)

Willow

Pen & Ink by Trisha Sugarek


 


In Japan the Samurai/poets would frequently write Haiku before battle. Death poems were considered a necessity, graceful, natural, and emotionally neutral, in accordance with the teachings of Buddha.


Like a rotten log

half buried in the ground

my life, which has not flowered,

comes
to this sad end. 

Minamoto Yorimasa  1104-1180


Samurai Song  ©  T.Sugarek


delicate blossom

rests in the still gnarled hand

bruised petals weep tears


weary eyes open

tiny cuts, the body bleeds

peace still years away


sun rise breaks the hill

heralds another battle

draw your sword and charge


   ( Three sets, three lines each.     First line = 5 syllable, second line = 7 syllables, third line = 5 syllables) Traditionally, some reference to nature should be included.


Original pen, brush & ink by Trisha Sugarek

Original pen, brush & ink by Trisha Sugarek


Farewell in the Rain  ©


rain drips through the trees                                     

kissing soft eyebrows and skin

overflowing eyes


tongue steals a rain drop

from the beloved’s ripe cheek

or was it a tear


goodbye soaked in the rain

farewell cries the broken heart

more tears rain drops blend


When I first starting writing this timeless style of poetry, I would very often write the poem first, not worrying about too many words/syllables.  Then I would edit and pare it down to its simplest form.   Now, I do tend to think, dream and write a poem in Haiku style.  That will come.


Featured in her book, The World of Haiku

Featured in her book, The World of Haiku


Try it!  If you would like, send me your efforts and I will publish your Haiku on my blog (with full credit to you, of course)


For more about Haiku and how to create it click here   

Haiku posted here is by blogger, Trisha Sugarek

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