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Jennifer
, you're an excellent wordsmith with solid fiction fundamentals. The premise of your
novel
is compelling, and I was drawn in by that first haunting surveillance of the child killer. I think you did an excellent job developing
Emily's character
and making her a very likable, believable heroine. I also think your dialogue is very strong. The voices are clear and distinct, and you did a great job using dialogue to not only pick up the pace but also advance the plot and reveal character...
Published on August 24, 2010 12:37