The Amazing Hell Of Blurb Writing (I Hate Your Blurb Follow Up)

A wrote an article called “I Hate Your Blurb” and it, in all of its charm, can be found here.

If you wade through the discussions, you might see that I told someone I would pick apart my own blurb. So now it’s time to do just that.

Here’s my blurb in its current form:

Twenty-three year old Dimitri has to do what he is told—literally. Controlled by a paranormal bond, he is forced to use his wits to fulfill unlimited deadly wishes made by multimillionaire Karl Walker.

Dimitri has no idea how his f...