Making the Cut
I love writing to the rhythm of a spring rain. Sitting in my bedroom, the pitter-patter of raindrops on the roof place a spell over my pen. To the April music, I finished my ghostly short story for Moon Shadows , a +Laurel Highlands Publishing Halloween anthology.
The Hunt clocked roughly a thousand words heavy of the 5,000 word upper limit. It was time to cull my pretties.
When I write, I fall in love with each and every word. I choose them carefully. I string them together with precision. How can I possibly eliminate one word, let alone whole lines or *gasp* entire scenes?
Brutally.
Although pressing the delete key pains me, sentences shortened. Mind you, tightening of the story would happen during editing anyway. However, a few words here and there do not lighten the word load.
I pruned two scenes. As lovely as they were, they had to go. The deleted scenes setup for a sequel to the Hunt , but they were not essential to plot advancement. I will use those scenes as flashbacks in the sequel.
By the end of the Hunt , I slashed well over five hundred words. It reads like a lean, mean hunting machine.
Shaving a story is more than stabbing in the dark. Annihilation is deliberate. Just as there is a rhythm to writing, there is a rhythm to the slaughter called editing. How will you make the cut?
Published on April 07, 2014 06:17
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