TIME GONE WRONG

There are many reasons awriter’s work is considered weak.A faulty time line is among them.

The statement below was made by a reader on a book discussion

list to which I belong:(Disclaimer: The locations in this passage have been changed to

protect the author.)

“After Paris it all began to fall apart for me. A lot of skipping around—unexplained time

periods went by that didn’t make sense. He was in Puerto Rico, running for his

life. Then he was beaten in New York. In the next scene, the heroine was...