Right Now
I need to write a poem
about how
my thoughts
are
misperceived by me
I don’t believe
I’m a loser
The steps I take
betray me
Right
and
wrong
Carving
a way
to my destiny
is creating
something
that does not exist
the only way
it will happen
is
if
I believe
that something
that has never happened before
can happen
right
now
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Christopher
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Feb 24, 2014 03:04PM
Dear Raven: Nice poem, melancholy, but not depressing, hope inspired, but realistic. You're a better than good writer. Christopher.
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Christopher wrote: "Dear Raven: Nice poem, melancholy, but not depressing, hope inspired, but realistic. You're a better than good writer. Christopher."Thank you for the compliment Sir Chris.
Dear Raven, I was reading your poem, "Right Now," in my reference. Last evening, I was considering the last four ounces in my Jack Daniel's bottle. . . . so right now was apt. On wearing an Afro in Vermont -- nice title, by the way -- sure you can, but be alert, some old folks may try to tap maple syrup from you. . . . Christopher.
I still have yet to drink maple syrup from the tree or try all the pancake houses there, that there are to try it with. So many things to do in Vermont this summer of all places ironically. You're not from Vermont, are you? Am I forgetting? I think you should get a NutriBullet and skip Jack D. It's more fun.
NutriBullet? Sounds ominously -- healthy.
I am not from Vermont, grew up in London/Paris, then the Canary Islands. I'm from nowhere, but going somewhere fast. Best to you, CB
