Synopsis: Adamite Revelation (a Team Girl adventure)

Eile and Sunny ride their bikes up into the foothills. They've been hired by a client to deliver legal papers to her at Tír na nÓg, a private resort she owns. When they arrive, they discover two things: first, the client hasn't arrived yet, and she expects them to wait for her; second, her resort is a nudist colony, and nudity is mandatory. If they don't hand deliver the papers to her, they will forfeit their fee, and they need the money. Sunny is eager, but despite Eile's mortified reluctance, they decide to go for it. The gate guard shows them to a locker room where they can undress, then they are driven in an electric cart to the clubhouse. The grounds are sprawling, with a golf course, jogging and exercise trails, horse trails, hiking trails, a lake and beach, a woods, even a cliff face for rock climbing. The clubhouse itself has all the usual resort amenities. When they arrive, they are greeted by a hostess who tells them a room has been reserved for them, prepaid, along with a guest membership for a week that entitles them to use all facilities. Sunny seems excited at the unexpected vacation and not the least bit self-conscious, but Eile can't help trying to cover herself.

Once they get settled in their room, Sunny decides to go exploring. Eile would just as soon stay in the room forever, so Sunny goes off without her. That hurts Eile; she can't help feel deserted. She realizes that Sunny isn't at all embarrassed, but then, she's got such a nicer body than her skinny frame, that would come natural. Not that Eile is ashamed of her body, she just doesn't believe in such intimate displays. Though, she reflects, if she had a body like Sunny she might feel more tempted to show it off.

She watches TV for awhile, then gets hungry. There's no kitchenette in the room, and when she calls down to the front desk, she discovers that there's no room service, but they have a full service restaurant open 24-hours a day. She doesn't want to starve, so she figures she'll have to grin and bare it. She tries to avoid meeting people and has a number of terrifying moments when she's surprised by other patrons, but she finally makes it to the restaurant and manages to get to a secluded table in a back corner. She uses the menu to cover her bosom. From where she sits, she can see almost the entire restaurant, and she spots Sunny at a table with twelve other people, laughing and joking like they were old friends. That hurts her more. Sunny should be with her, not a bunch of slutty hangers-on who probably just want to ogle her body.

A guy walks up to her table and asks if he can sit with her. She can see him quite plainly and she uses the menu to shield her eyes. She's no stranger to male genitalia; she's not a virgin, and she and Sunny sometimes rent porno. But seeing it in the flesh for the first time in years is disconcerting. Meanwhile he explains that this is his first time here and he's a bit nervous, and hers is the only single table left. She invites him to sit just so she doesn't have to look at him, and when he does she lowers the menu. She's pleasantly surprised. He's handsome, in a cute, innocent sort of way. He smiles ingratiatingly, and she can't help but smile back. However, there's just one menu. Before she gives it up, she covers herself with her napkin, tying it around her neck. He asks if he makes her uncomfortable. She admits that this is her first time, too, but no, actually, he doesn't, she's just still shy. He confides that it took all his courage just to come down here, but he didn't want to go hungry. He literally had to clasp his hands behind his back to keep from covering himself. She admits to the same, except she wasn't as successful with her hands. He tells her that his worst fear is that he'll see a beautiful girl and get an erection. Eile blushes at his frankness, but remarks at least she doesn't have to worry about that. He states that he's glad she can't see him now. She blushes again, though more because she feels her nipples harden, but she also laughs with genuine amusement. He extends his hand and introduces himself as Ganca; it's an Azerbaijani name, given to him by his mother. Eile takes it and introduces herself; he says her name is very pretty, like her, and that causes her to smile sheepishly. The waiter then comes by and they order lunch.

Sunny hears Eile's laugh and spots her at a table with a young man. At first she's happy she's found someone to socialize with, but then she feels jealous. Eile is her partner, not his; she should be beside her, not making googly-eyes at some gigolo. Her mood is soured for the rest of her lunch.

As they eat, Eile and Ganca make small talk, mostly about themselves. When they finish, he offers to escort her back to her room. She demurs, but when he tells her he knows a back way that can avoid people, she reluctantly accepts. She asks him to go first, then she removes the napkin and follows. The first short leg is through a public area, and Eile nearly dies of embarrassment, but the rest of the way is private, and she gradually loosens up. Finally they reach her room. He turns around and for a brief moment she covers herself, but then she thinks how ridiculous she must look, and she folds her arms behind her back. He approves of her new confidence, and asks if he can see her again tomorrow; for breakfast maybe? She accepts and he promises to meet her at seven-thirty. He then waves and walks off. Eile watches him leave and feels better about herself.

Sunny sees Eile leave with the guy. Concerned, she excuses herself and follows them at a discrete distance. She sees them talk outside the door of their room, and is surprised to see Eile showing herself to him, but he eventually leaves and she goes inside. Sunny hesitates. She wants to confront Eile over why she spent her time with him and not her, but she also trusts her partner and doesn't want to give her the impression she doesn't. Finally she decides to play it cool. She walks in as if nothing happened. Eile is standing in the middle of the room, daydreaming, but when Sunny enters she turns and grins at her. She asks how her day was. Before she can answer, Eile embraces her, smooches her on the mouth, then spins her around and throws her on the bed, falling on top of her. Surprised, she stutters that her day was fine, then asks how hers was. Eile states she missed her, and proceeds to ravish her. Befuddled, Sunny struggles at first, but then mentally shrugs and joins in with gusto.

Numerous hours later, they sit in the restaurant and have a very late supper. Though the place is practically deserted, there are still people around, but Sunny marvels at how relaxed Eile has become. They talk about things to do the next day, then Sunny asks her about the man. She says he was just some guy who wanted some privacy like she did, nothing more. She asks where she went with him afterwards. Eile at first facetiously asks why the third degree, and Sunny girlishly tries to drop it, but then Eile states that he just showed her a more private way back to their room. Sunny lets it go, and they return to their room, but as Eile falls asleep, Sunny begins to wonder: she wants to trust Eile, but she doesn't know if she can now.

In the morning while Eile showers, Sunny calls to reserve horses. Then there's a knock at the door. She opens it, thinking it might be their client, but it's the man instead. He says she must be Sunny, then introduces himself as Ganca. When Sunny asks how he knows her, he tells her Eile spoke of her at lunch yesterday. Before more can be said, Eile comes out, drying herself off. She surprises Sunny by acting calm and happy to see him. She tells Sunny they had a date for breakfast, then asks him if Sunny can join them. He agrees without reservation. Then she tells him that afterwards, she and Sunny are going horseback riding, and asks Sunny if he can come along. Sunny is more hesitant in her affirmation, but Eile doesn't seem to notice, and in fact seems ecstatic.

At breakfast, Eile and Ganca monopolize the conversation. They try to engage Sunny, but she barely gets a dozen words out before they are off chatting between themselves again. During the horse ride, Ganca rides between her and Eile, and they laugh and joke the whole time, even galloping off together at the end to race back to the stables. Lunch is pretty much a repeat of breakfast, and then they spend the afternoon playing tennis, which Sunny is lousy at, and besides they can't find her a partner for doubles, so she just sits on the sidelines watching them. By the end of the day, Sunny feels like a third wheel, and she barely says a word through dinner, but when she and Eile return to their room, Eile ravishes her again. Afterwards, Sunny asks Eile who she was making love to, her or Ganca. Eile tries to laugh it off, telling Sunny she's her partner, but Sunny detects a certain hesitancy in her voice, as if she is no longer certain, and that disturbs her.

Over the next three days, the same pattern repeats itself: Ganca eats with them and participates in activities with them. Even when Sunny tries to arrange an afternoon at the spa, Eile asks Ganca to accompany them. Sunny feels more and more marginalized, like a kid sister following her older sibling around as she does neat adult stuff with her 'boyfriend'. At night, however, Eile makes love to Sunny in an urgent, almost desperate fashion, but each time it seems to Sunny that Eile is more and more distracted, as if she wants to be with someone else.

On the morning of their fifth day at the colony, Sunny arranges for Eile and her to bicycle up into the mountains and have a private picnic lunch, all by themselves, at a secluded spot. When she tells Eile, however, Eile informs her she and Ganca were going to take an inner tube ride down the stream. She invites Sunny to come along, but Sunny's finally had enough and explodes. They fight and Sunny storms off, leaving Eile alone.

While Eile fumes, Ganca arrives. She tells him what happened, and she begins to feel guilty for the way she's treated Sunny these past few days. Ganca assures her she has nothing to feel sorry about, and he embraces her. Instead of pull away, she returns the embrace. He caresses her face and they kiss. He guides her to the bed and she lays down on it. He lays beside her and they begin to make love. After a short while he maneuvers on top of her and she shudders as he penetrates her. Sunny walks in, apologizing for her outburst, then stops dead. Ganca withdraws and Eile sits up. Sunny has a look of hurt anguish on her face, but she doesn't cause a scene. She asks Eile if she loves him; she replies maybe, she isn't sure. Sunny then asks if Eile still loves her. She replies she doesn't know, maybe not, maybe she never really did. Sunny hangs her head and states she'll leave them alone, turns, and walks out before Eile can react.

As Sunny closes the door, she sees Medb in the hallway, staring at her. She realizes Medb must have been their client. Before she can ask her about it, though, Medb asks her if she intends to fight for Eile. Sunny feels confused, but she replies that if Eile is happy with Ganca, she won't stand in her way. Medb wants to hear the whole story, and she takes Sunny to the lounge for a drink.

Ganca tries to re-initiate their assignation, but Eile pushes him away, saying she needs to talk to Sunny. He says he understands and that he'll wait for her. She goes looking for Sunny and is told she is in the lounge with the colony's owner. She is surprised to see Medb, but the massive woman leaves them alone. They start to talk about their situation, when Sunny gets upset. Eile turns and sees Ganca enter the lounge. She goes to intercept him when Medb appears. Startled, she blasts him, and Eile is shocked to see him change into a diminutive, fairy-like creature. Medb binds him before he can escape, and explains that he is Gancanagh, a fairy that seduces lonely young women, who after sex then pine away and die. She makes it confess that the Daoine Sidhe had sent it to break up their partnership. Medb threatens it with massive bodily harm if it ever bothers them again, and lets it go. It disappears.

Medb follows the Girls back to their room and accepts the papers she needs. She states that she will arrange payment ASAP, then admits that she had an ulterior motive for bringing them to the colony. She thought it would be a way for them to get some personal time away from the hassles and worries of home and work, in a resort-like atmosphere, while at the same time possibly getting Eile out of her shell more. She apologizes that it backfired. She then suggests that they stay the remaining two days of their pre-paid reservation; they need to talk.

When Medb goes off to her office, Eile asks Sunny if it's too late for them to have her picnic. She acquiesces and they ride up into the mountains to the secluded spot. They eat, then afterward talk. Eile apologizes for her behavior, but states that Sunny hurt her by leaving her alone that first day. Sunny apologizes for doing that, saying they're partners, they need to work things out together, but she honestly didn't know how Eile felt. Eile agrees she should be more open, and Sunny admits she needs to be more aware of Eile's feelings. They decide to continue their relationship, but try to take it to a new level of emotional intimacy. Nonetheless, they plan to continue their physical intimacy, and they make love there in the meadow, at a more gentle, sensual pace.
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Published on February 05, 2014 04:07 Tags: elie-chica, fairies, nudist, sunny-hiver, synopsis, team-girl
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