Another thing I work on in revision, maybe after the firs...

Another thing I work on in revision, maybe after the first couple passes, is adding physical details. I'm a writer who underwrites in the early stages of my work, so what I do at some point in the revision process is look for windows or doors, places where the manuscript needs or can benefit from more details, places I can enter to add these details. I want to slow things down and I want to make the reader more involved in the scenes.

Overwriters should go through the manuscript looking for p...