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Plus I've had an M/M/M set-up lurking in the plot-bunny cage so this was a nice change to set it free. I thought an established-trio story would let me go short, but nope. Not short. I hope you enjoy meeting Casey, Scott and Will.

I like the idea of an established trio. It means the whole focus of the story won't be on the getting together of the three, but what comes after. I think that's neat.

You and your ideas! One fire just alights the others. :) (Heeeeeey, isn't there some Hidden Wolves stories to work on??)
Don't mind me. I'm just an impatient, spoiled reader. I'll be good and not bother you...too much. :D I'm just glad you like these challenges. They've given us some great reads.


I like long stories, so no complaints from me. :) But sit and polish as much as you want. It's better to have something that you feel good about than feel rushed.

I just wish I could read Hidden Wolves 3 for the current Bingo category. *pouts*
Also, if anyone wants some great hockey stories and doesn't mind MF (along with some MFM and MMF), I just read some great ones! The proofreading is terrible, and I'm trying to figure out how to out-of-the-blue email and volunteer to beta for the author, but the writing and characterization is so fantastic that they're worth reading even with the errors. And the BDSM, which is really not my thing, so that tells you how great the writing must be, LOL. Seriously, even with all that I may have a new favorite author...


As for the books, series is "The Dartmouth Cobras" by Bianca Sommerland. The first book, Game Misconduct, is free. That - and being in the mood for hockey romance - is the only reason I read it (BDSM and M/M/M/M/F not being my thing). I went into it expecting to DNF it, and instead got engrossed enough to finish it and check out the second. It is, in my opinion, the weakest of the series. So even if you don't love it, if you at least think the characterization is decent, it's worth checking out Book 2.
The second book, Defensive Zone, may be my favorite of the series, though Offside (Book 4) is close. The series is sort of Suz Brockmann-esque in that character story arcs continue over multiple books. So the trio I love so much from Book 2 has their story arc continue and get better and better through the subsequent books. The hockey elements ring mostly true, and it's great getting to be in a player's POV during a game. I can't wait for the next book... :)
Oh! Another thing you'll probably notice is she shares your predilection (and mine!) for sentence fragments starting with 'And' and 'But'. It's sometimes almost a bit much even for me, but it seems to work for her. I devoured the books, one right after another. And if there were more out, I'd still happily be reading them. Anyway, if you check the series out, I hope you love it as much as I do!


Jess, sounds like you've got a talent for it. I'm not sure whether I could read the author you're recommending or not (I may check her out since the first one's free), but too many typos usually just pull me right out of the story.

Kaje wrote: "First draft of Hidden Wolves 3 is done, but it needs a polish before submitting it. 125K, so it probably needs a bit of trimming too."
Your long books are wonderful; the longer the better. I'm really looking forward to this one.


I had fun with my first time writing M/M/M, even if it grew long. And the other stories are fun reads too.

J., too many typos usually pull me right out of the story too. That's why the incredulity with which I recommend this series - despite the typos, I kept reading anyway. The writing (IMO) was that good. Just think how good it'd be without the typos...

I had fun with my first time writing M/M/M, even if it grew long. And the other stories are fun reads too."
I picked it up last night, thinking I'd just skim to see what changes you'd made since I last read it. Silly me! Your writing did what it always does, and pulled me in. Before I knew it, I was reading the whole thing. :D I love the changes you made, which solved my biggest issue with the story. I now love all three guys (pretty close to) equally. I did see a few little things I wish I'd caught previously, but I remind myself no one is perfect; not even (especially not, darnit) me.
I'm looking forward to checking out the rest of the anthology. :)