Sunday Snippets 17 – Changing Tracks

Welcome back to the Weekend Writing Warriors! I’m still keeping you all intrigued with the beginning of the series Changing Tracks (The Dominion Falls Series book 1). You know, my amnesiac with the eidetic memory, Jane Doe…and the brothel-owner, anti-hero…Cole Mitchell.

Now we’re back in Jane’s POV. Getting close to the end of the story. Much has happened I can’t explain, but among them, Cole sold the contract on his doctoring whore {Daisy} to another, less “friendly” brothel owner Daisy tries to tell Jane it’s all right, but Jane is having none of it…and in this 8 is my favoritest line ever (the one about the chicken):

“He said the money was too good; after the last attack he needed cash to fix up the saloon and I was the fast way to get it.” Daisy took a shaky breath and forced a smile. “At least I get to dress better, and he’s going to let me do some doctoring.”

“Painting the feathers of a chicken doesn’t make it a peacock.” Jane glared at Guy’s amused visage. “I’m going to kill them both. Stupid men and their pissing contests. They’ll never understand what idiots they are.”

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