MOROCCO Revision and WIP Update

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Got some work done on MOROCCO today [7/11:], but not nearly as much as I'd hoped to do.  Today was one of those easily-distracted type of days, further made difficult by a torrential afternoon storm and the necessity of eating.

I'm still spending time going through the story to ask myself Big, Important questions about each scene and character, making notes, cross-referencing previous scenes and thoughts, and so forth.  Editing can be tough work...