Thoughts on Writing: the Revision Process

It's always been a secret thought with me that prose rhythms are akin to
poetry, or ought to be. Certainly I take my time over sentences that
don't sound 'right' to me in their context, whatever that may be.

A good sentence should flow, should be both elegant and fit for purpose -
by which I mean it should communicate whatever the writer needed it to
communicate, which might be nothing or