And Add an Inch

It's odd advice that I received from a non-writer friend of mine, but it's very pointed and helpful. I need a little bit of extra on one part of the short story, but not a lot. She guesstimated it would add an inch to the story (which is less than 1000 words).

I find it very interesting to get advice that way. It was more specific than I thought it would be, and it's great.

It'll be submitted in no time. Sometimes it's better to get an opinion from someone other than another writer. [Though...