After many days fiddling with paragraphs

Kehfrey/Herfod/Qirmiz Ylf, fanart by Ambra based on one of my characters in The Soulstone Chronicles.

I think finally I have the opening scene of Redemption 4 smoothed out and showing what it needs to show. It was a very fiddly scene. I have in one storage room ( a big closet, ha ha) about fourteen or so people having a group/family meeting with Qirmiz. This scene directly follows the end of book three in the set.  Lots of characters want to talk and say their piece before Qirmiz up and disappears on them, which he does.

It’s a relief to have this scene finalized, because I am one step closer to meshing the former end of Redemption 3 with the new beginning of Redemption 4 and making the final book in this set. And hopefully I won’t need to do another big family meeting scene anytime soon, though I can foresee a few, not to mention Divine Council meetings and what not.