Review of UNBREATHABLE

Hello readers, 

UNBREATHABLE by Hafsah Laziaf might be out a little early!! Following is a random poem I wrote, but I don't know if it goes with the story:
Just beginning staring, smiling waiting for the sunbut the clouds and rain come inyou upset meI'm unwritten, unbreathable 
I'll let my skin feel the rainI'll still be unwritten, but now breathable. 
Review
Right as I finished reading it I wanted to reread it. From the beginning of the story you are already captivated by the big and little things that are happening. I love the voice! It's poetic. 
I came to this realization early in the story, so you probably know how I feel through out the rest of it. 
Of course there are some surprises. I like the complexity of a love triangle, I may not understand everything, but that's what I love about it. It's beautiful nonetheless. I cried a couple times. Awesome writing does that! 
Thanks & Love,