Really nice review from the judge of the 21st Annual Writer's Digest Self-Published Book Awards

I entered "Life Erupted" in this contest. Some 2,800 books were in the competition, with one grand prize winner and nine first place winners, one for each of nine genre categories. While I did not win, I felt as if I had won, somewhat, after I read the great review the judge sent me today. Here is an excerpt. Thanks to the judge and to all of you who have bought the book and enjoyed it.

Judges Commentary*:

I really enjoyed reading Life Erupted. The main character, Jenn, is immediately likable and very vividly drawn; I was able to discern her character very quickly, and I enjoyed the interactions she has with the various other characters--especially her father, Bianca, Tony, and Erik. The other characters are drawn well and everyone seems to grow throughout the narrative.

One of the strongest parts of this book is the authorial tone. The descriptions of various people and settings, told through the lens of the POV character, are masterful and set the tone for the book. I never felt like this description was heavy handed. You also do a beautiful job, for the most part, of balancing exposition with action. While there are parts where you do "tell," the information you're conveying is important, and it's told through the lens of the POV character, so it still works and engaged me.

In terms of design and packaging, I found the illustrations to be cute and fitting for the tone of the book. The overall package is professional.

Overall, this is an excellent book. Thank you for the chance to read!


*Commentary may be quoted as: “Judge, Writer’s Digest 21st Annual Self-Published Book Awards”