How using the Gunning Fog Index improves your writing

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I can never get fairy cakes to rise. They come out the oven, lopsided, and barely peeping over the cases. In short, they are an embarrassment. Is it the sifting, the eggs, the mixing, my oven or simple incompetence?

Garry Rogers‘s insight:

 

Improving clarity is not "dumbing down."  Use short sentences and words. 

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