Trying Out a Book Blurb
I’ve written a semi-final draft of the book blurb for the sequel to "Green Expectations". It goes like this:
“A heart-felt promise from Mike Simmiss, President of the Save Our Forests Association (SOFA), did not stop Vanessa Denton from giving her life for Gaia and Mathews Bush.
“The promise drives Mike to revive a flagging campaign against logging the forest. Time is running out and the chance of success seems against the odds but, not compromising, he grasps every last opportunity.
“SOFA goes up against big business, the new owner of the forest, Jackson-Halberd (NZ) Ltd. SOFA has to contend with the company’s successful Managing Director, John Baron, and its unscrupulous board member and stroke survivor, Ed Somerville.”
Would this interest you enough to read the book, which I’ve tentatively titled ‘Green Machinations’)? See any scope for improvement?
www.thomaswdevine.com
“A heart-felt promise from Mike Simmiss, President of the Save Our Forests Association (SOFA), did not stop Vanessa Denton from giving her life for Gaia and Mathews Bush.
“The promise drives Mike to revive a flagging campaign against logging the forest. Time is running out and the chance of success seems against the odds but, not compromising, he grasps every last opportunity.
“SOFA goes up against big business, the new owner of the forest, Jackson-Halberd (NZ) Ltd. SOFA has to contend with the company’s successful Managing Director, John Baron, and its unscrupulous board member and stroke survivor, Ed Somerville.”
Would this interest you enough to read the book, which I’ve tentatively titled ‘Green Machinations’)? See any scope for improvement?
www.thomaswdevine.com
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