Seeking BETA READERS for Sworn To Conflict

New call out for beta readers for Book Three! If you beta read Book Two, Sworn To Transfer, I’ll be sending an email out to see if you’re interested in reading Book Three. For NEW beta readers – read on.

SWORN TO CONFLICT is almost done and I would love reader feedback on the plot arc and character development. You can be any age, any experience level – all I ask is that you be enthusiastic about fantasy books. If you haven’t done this before – don’t worry about it. I’m looking for feedback as detailed as you want (i.e. Terah you missed a semicolon in the second line of paragraph four on page 87) or as broad as you want (i.e. I really didn’t like that Steve character – he’s too angry – change him ASAP).

What would be expected of you as a beta reader?


You would be emailed the manuscript/Word doc on Tues, Oct. 29th, and you’d have approximately five days to provide feedback (I’d need it back by Sat, Nov. 2nd).  Please only enter if you’re available during this timeframe.


You would be expected to give me your honest opinion about what you didn’t like, what you’d prefer to see changed (if anything), and basically just your overall thoughts. I’m not looking for unwarranted praise. Only your complete honesty can help me improve the story. Don’t worry about hurting my feelings.


Please agree to not share the story with anyone else.

If you are interested in reading Sworn To Conflict and providing feedback which will help me revise, please answer the following questions in the comment section of this blog post (people reading this on Goodreads will need to visit my actual blog to comment – comments made on Goodreads will not be considered):

1) Your first name
2) Your email address
3) Is this your first time doing a beta read or book critique?
4) Favorite authors (just so I can get a feel for your general likes)

I will post my list of beta readers on Mon, October 21st, so check back then!!!  Thanks so much!!!

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