Self-editing: Viewpoint Characters
Example 1: Clarice saw that Lecter had very yellow teeth. They looked sharp and strong, as if he'd chewed through his share of leathery carcasses. She heard them click while he spoke. The sound made her feel nervous and ready to leave the dungeon Virginia called a prison.
Example 2: His yellow teeth gleamed behind lips as leathery and red as the flesh they'd served as a gateway for.
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