In Defense of Those Naughty Words.

For the rest of this post. I will substitute a letter and @ for the swear word. Just to be nice.

"Lose the swears."

That is another oft repeated suggestion. But just that, nothing to back it up. Again, if I was given a good reason why, I would reconsider.

Lets explore why I don't mind having them. First draft did not. But the first time you met Vincent, after Beka stumbled in on his feeding. His line was "That was unforeseen."

In the novel it is: "That was a f@ up."

Which says more about his chara...