Does this story remind anyone else of Lorrie Moore? The story is short and until the last paragraph every single sentence uses a pronoun. The first paragraph is all "I" but the second is all "you" as the narrator gives information about a couple—the excuses they give, their quirks, their habits. Then there's a paragraph that's mixed "I" and "You" followed by a paragraph of "We." Eventually "They" enter the picture—various third parties—and then "he" when the couple's child is born. (Through h...
Published on June 21, 2010 09:57