I broke down and re-read "TB"

For those of you who don't know, I have written a untraditional tradition fantasy novel called "Tranquility's Blaze" about Lady Champion Bethany who has to choose between her secrets and her conscience to stop her magic-addicted sister from torching the elves and turning them into tasty kebabs. (My new query pitch, fyi).

Since today is Day 298 of it having been submitted (but who's counting?), I decided to read the novel. I haven't read it from start to finish in several months. So what's my i...