Writer’s Wisdom -Rule #37- The “As” Clause is for Amateurs “When ‘as’ works as a
conjunction, meaning ‘happening at the same time,’ it tends to weaken the power of the two clauses it conjoins. Avoid using ‘as’ clauses except when absolutely necessary.”
Taken from
The Writer’s Book of Wisdom - 101 Rules for Mastering Your Craft, by Steven Taylor Goldsberry, (http://www.amazon.com/The-Writers-Boo...)
Published on September 07, 2013 05:49