STAY OUT OF YOUR CHARACTER’S HEADS

A Guest Blog

by M. S. Kaye

Fight Princess blog tour September 2nd – 9th: on an adventure to meet fun bloggers and readers!

Staying out of the characters’ heads is the most momentously important thing I’ve learned about how to “show, not tell.”

Obviously, sometimes offering a morsel of a character’s thoughts is instrumental in helping the reader understand, but it should be limited to one morsel. If you have to write a paragraph of explanation, you need to find a better way to show the information...