revision pens

“Begin at the beginning," the King said, very gravely,

"and go on till you come to the end: then stop.”

~Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland









Behold the revision pen.

An excellent marker of progress.







Grey for the first full read-through.

Green for the second.

Then orange for the third.







Sometimes, with so many notes in one color,

the favorite penwon't make it