5 Tips for Cheeseless Dialogue

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Today we welcome Lori Freeland to WITS for the first time! Welcome Lori!


I’d Like My Dialogue Cheeseless. Please.


Like a Lactose Intolerant prefers his pizza minus the gut-churning cheese, I want my dialogue devoid of dairy.


Have you ever heard agents or editors say they flip to the first section of dialogue and if it’s cheesy, they don’t bother with the read?


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A very helpful article!
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Published on August 19, 2013 15:59
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