Book #2 - First Draft

The first draft of book #2 is done. The draft is about 25% longer than the completed first book.

I need to let it sit for a couple of days, then I will read it out loud to myself and tweak it so it sounds right. I'm sure it will get longer as I go in and flesh out areas that are thin.

I would then like to have 4 or 5 people read the draft as a focus group - they'll have a questionnaire to fill out. I would prefer two or three women readers, and at least one Iraq War Vet.