Waitress, I Need Two More Plot Points

What I'm reading: One Last Breath, by Laura GriffinThanks to Patrick for his helpful tips on editing yesterday. Lots of meat there.Quick wildlife update: A glimpse of red in an aspen outside our bedroom caught my eye. I didn't recognize the bird, so I mentioned it to the hubster. I could sense skepticism as he asked me to describe it. I'm sure he thought I'd seen one of our regular visitors. And,