Edited out 20 pages worth of scenes

Good stuff, too.  The deleted pages are in a messy pile on my office floor.  It’s time to go lean.  If I went back to earlier drafts I’m sure I could find a great bloopers reel worth of hilarious typos and awful sentences.  Too bad this isn’t a movie.  I’d be all ready for the bonus material section of the DVD.  I should be done with all my edits in a week.  Then back to Penguin it goes.