A Writer’s Exercise: Foggy Inspiration



Fog on a summer’s night mesmerizes.
From the time it rolls in until the sun burns it off, I imagine all
sorts of possibilities.




People always ask from where I get my
inspiration. The answer is simple. Most of the time, I look out my
window.




I watch the fog hug the streetlamp,
then reach to kiss the window’s screen. Eventually it fills the
void between the buildings, shrouding the brick and clapboard in a
hushed whisper.




The sky begins to lighten. A blue-gray
glow settles into the mountains. Retreating into the valley, the fog
leaves a shiny roof that reflects the light of the newly liberated
streetlamp.




Headlights pierce through the dense air
before plunging into the valley. They emerge with a heightened
Doppler effect, which barges through my window.




A still breeze rocks the opened blinds
gently. Spreading a chill, it mocks summer. I pull my covers over
my head.




In my writing, I often use what lurks
outside my window. I made a mist only Declan could see. My heroes
wade through an unfamiliar fog laden valley that hides fears just
beyond their view.




The elements creep into my books to set a mood or
to create obstacles. What is real can be fantastical with only a
stroke of a pen.



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Published on August 04, 2013 15:37
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message 1: by Robert (new)

Robert Thomas Fog is a great mood-setter. You describe it well.

But soft what light through yonder window breaks...now-a-days it is not the east but a pale moon filled with zombies.

Getting ready to start on Bow of the Moon. I need to see what is happening to everyone.


message 2: by I.E. (new)

I.E. Robert wrote: "Fog is a great mood-setter. You describe it well.

But soft what light through yonder window breaks...now-a-days it is not the east but a pale moon filled with zombies.

Getting ready to start on ..."


Thank you.

The Zombie Apocalypse is coming... just not in any of my books. :)


message 3: by Robert (new)

Robert Thomas None of my books either. I'm not much of a zombie fan. I have read one or two that are well-written but I tend to stay away from them.

Just out of curiosity, how do you split your time between writing poetry and prose?


message 4: by I.E. (new)

I.E. Robert wrote: "Just out of curiosity, how do you split your time between writing poetry and prose?"

It all depends on what pops into my head. I do not write as many poems as I used to, but I have managed to add a poem to each book so far.

My favorite in my books is from Tricentennial, "written" by my 14 year old main female character, Nickie.

Darkness quakes my heart
Ruthlessly depart
Pieces of my soul
Reveals gaping hole
Mending time will take
Vengeance mine to make


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