Query Workshop: Day 3

Firstly,  Kristin Miller is giving away a copy of YOU WISH! Go enter to win! 

Secondly, Thank you to everyone for providing such great feedback to our queriers. I think it is VERY helpful to get multiple perspectives, and I really appreciate those of you who have taken time to critique the queries on day 1 and day 2.

Okay, here is today's query:


Dear Mandy Hubbard:

I've been following your blog ever since I saw the title Prada and Prejudice. That's the sort of playful tone I've brought to my lat...