You guys always come through! I read the comments and emails, taking in all the ways you tweaked and restructured and added and reduced and revised, and I took slices of various of advice from this one and that one, stole a structure from another, cut some you said to cut, fluffed out things you said to fluff out, and got copy that made my pub house very happy.
Here are two of the nineteen TANGIBLE ways all your fresh eyes helped:
1) I realized my own word choices in the original made it sound...
Published on July 22, 2013 09:19