This? This? Or this? Help!

In case the title of this post wasn’t clear, I need feedback! Firstly, I’m very tempted to change the title of my book of short stories from ‘Postcards from Torrmow’ [a bit pretentious?] to just ‘The Vintage Egg, and other stories from tomorrow’. Yes? No? Maybe? Secondly I’ve been wearing my fingers to the bone […]