The Mannequin Makers Location Guide: Part Three: Crossman's Gully
What the guidebooks say
Name: Crossman's GullyNature: FictionalLocation: A day's ride (by horse) from Marumaru (also fictional, see part one).Importance in The Mannequin Makers: features in Part Two, Part Three and Part Four. Without giving away the plot, let's just say the climax happens here.Inspired by: Earthquakes (the town), Clay Cliffs, Knottingly Park Bush Hut
What the novel says
The locations in Part One and Two weren't too difficult to talk about without spoilers. I guess saying there's a shipwreck in the subantarctic is a bit of a spoiler, since it happens halfway through the book, but it's pretty clearly signalled on the back of the book.
Crossman's Gully is a bit different.
Let's just say it's a place certain characters retreat to in various times in the novel when town gets a bit too much.
The notable features of this gully are it's geography and the hut from which Avis has just emerged in the passage above.
A world of pure imagination
When I first ventured into Crossman's Gully in the first draft of Part Two of the novel, I didn't know what it looked like. I didn't even know it would have a name.
So the first draft was a bit vague. There was a hut in a gully.
Good stuff.
I knew that I'd need to flesh it out more in future drafts, and when I returned to the gully in subsequent parts of the novel.
With this in mind, I went on my road trip in late January 2012 (third time in three posts it's been mentioned... must've been important).
Clay Cliffs and Earthquakes
I blogged about my visits to Clay Cliffs and Earthquakes here. Basically, I was drawn to these places by their names. I didn't know what I'd find exactly, and certainly wasn't thinking: this can be my gully.
But when I arrived at both I thought: this can be my gully.
First up was Clay Cliffs, near Omaramara. The geology of the place was pretty interesting, but I was more struck by the view looking back through the formations to the braided river, the brown plain and the foothills.
And a bit further around, you glimpse the snow-dusted Southern Alps.
The scene I'd already written in my gully occurred in early January. I was there late January, so it was pretty similar. I began rewriting my scene in my head.
I thought I'd cracked it. I thought Clay Cliffs was enough.
Then I went to Earthquakes. And I was like, "This is my gully."
And then, when I went to Waimate, I had the final piece of the puzzle: Knottlingly Park Bush Hut, the design of which I shamelessly appropriated for the hut in my gully where events happen.
In the end, Crossman's Gully is all of these places and none of them.
Name: Crossman's GullyNature: FictionalLocation: A day's ride (by horse) from Marumaru (also fictional, see part one).Importance in The Mannequin Makers: features in Part Two, Part Three and Part Four. Without giving away the plot, let's just say the climax happens here.Inspired by: Earthquakes (the town), Clay Cliffs, Knottingly Park Bush Hut
What the novel says
"I made my way slowly to the door and eased it open. The hinges gave a creak but the man did not wake. Outside, I surveyed our destination for the first time. To my left a curving wall of rock rose up to a height of thirty feet. The rock was yellow with black tarnished edges and greenish-black vertical stripes. A collection of square-sided boulders lay at the foot of this cliff, their surface brownish-grey with pocks of the same sandy yellow. Dry, thorny bushes and larger trees with waxy green leaves sprang up from gaps between the boulders but I stood on a sort of plain with knee-high grass that swirled in the breeze like some diaphanous material. The grass was bound by another curving wall of rock perhaps forty yards away. It was as if I stood between two cupped stone hands." (p.109)Skirting around the spoilers
The locations in Part One and Two weren't too difficult to talk about without spoilers. I guess saying there's a shipwreck in the subantarctic is a bit of a spoiler, since it happens halfway through the book, but it's pretty clearly signalled on the back of the book.
Crossman's Gully is a bit different.
Let's just say it's a place certain characters retreat to in various times in the novel when town gets a bit too much.
The notable features of this gully are it's geography and the hut from which Avis has just emerged in the passage above.
A world of pure imagination
When I first ventured into Crossman's Gully in the first draft of Part Two of the novel, I didn't know what it looked like. I didn't even know it would have a name.
So the first draft was a bit vague. There was a hut in a gully.
Good stuff.
I knew that I'd need to flesh it out more in future drafts, and when I returned to the gully in subsequent parts of the novel.
With this in mind, I went on my road trip in late January 2012 (third time in three posts it's been mentioned... must've been important).
Clay Cliffs and Earthquakes
I blogged about my visits to Clay Cliffs and Earthquakes here. Basically, I was drawn to these places by their names. I didn't know what I'd find exactly, and certainly wasn't thinking: this can be my gully.
But when I arrived at both I thought: this can be my gully.
First up was Clay Cliffs, near Omaramara. The geology of the place was pretty interesting, but I was more struck by the view looking back through the formations to the braided river, the brown plain and the foothills.

And a bit further around, you glimpse the snow-dusted Southern Alps.

The scene I'd already written in my gully occurred in early January. I was there late January, so it was pretty similar. I began rewriting my scene in my head.
I thought I'd cracked it. I thought Clay Cliffs was enough.
Then I went to Earthquakes. And I was like, "This is my gully."


And then, when I went to Waimate, I had the final piece of the puzzle: Knottlingly Park Bush Hut, the design of which I shamelessly appropriated for the hut in my gully where events happen.

In the end, Crossman's Gully is all of these places and none of them.
Published on July 21, 2013 12:00
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