Tamar’s Poem, and a chance to win a copy of UnEmbraceable
This is a portion of UnEmbraceable that I actually removed, because my helpful beta readers said it was too political and came out of nowhere.
The poem burst out of me while I was sitting in a Walmart parking lot, of all places, late on a Wednesday evening. It’s not my choice writing venue, but it worked out that night.
This was originally two-thirds of the way through the novel when Tamar begins to process her broken life on a deep level. It doesn’t give any spoilers, but rather tells about her life in foster care and as a runaway teen.
I don’t often get political, but when I learned how many kids in the foster care system are on major psychiatric drugs, and also that 95% of kids who are trafficked in America have been in the foster care system, something boiled inside of me.
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Tamar
I spent many hours journaling with the stubs of pencils they allowed me to have. Thoughts spilled onto the page that I never considered were inside me.
I’m a child of America:
I’ve seen all its cities
Carried on the backs of greed.
I’m a child of America:
I’ve seen the worst motels
From sea to shining sea.
I’m a child of America:
Another one abandoned
By a government that thought it knew best
How to tame the beast of my own decisions
Inside its pills and foster care system
And yet another wrongful arrest.
I just want peace
In the land of the free
And the home of the brave.
But all you want is for me to behave
Like a good child of America.
One who will feed your greed
And still call you the best.


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