Tamar’s Poem, and a chance to win a copy of UnEmbraceable

This is a portion of UnEmbraceable that I actually removed, because my helpful beta readers said it was too political and came out of nowhere.


The poem burst out of me while I was sitting in a Walmart parking lot, of all places, late on a Wednesday evening. It’s not my choice writing venue, but it worked out that night.


This was originally two-thirds of the way through the novel when Tamar begins to process her broken life on a deep level. It doesn’t give any spoilers, but rather tells about her life in foster care and as a runaway teen.


I don’t often get political, but when I learned how many kids in the foster care system are on major psychiatric drugs, and also that 95% of kids who are trafficked in America have been in the foster care system, something boiled inside of me.


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Tamar

I spent many hours journaling with the stubs of pencils they allowed me to have. Thoughts spilled onto the page that I never considered were inside me.


I’m a child of America:


I’ve seen all its cities


Carried on the backs of greed.


I’m a child of America:


I’ve seen the worst motels


From sea to shining sea.


I’m a child of America:


Another one abandoned


By a government that thought it knew best


How to tame the beast of my own decisions


Inside its pills and foster care system


And yet another wrongful arrest.


I just want peace


In the land of the free


And the home of the brave.


But all you want is for me to behave


Like a good child of America.


One who will feed your greed


And still call you the best.



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