Brevity is the soul of wit, and tediousness the limbs and outward flourishes

Hey all! Revisions are BENDING TO MY WILL! MWAHAHAHAHA!
Okay um. I think all the oxygen from my brain is gone because of too much revisions (I just typed "brain from my oxygen") so I will be brief! Actually brief, not like Friar Lawrence or Polonius when they say that (Shakespeare REALLY [...:]